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We all have little monsters in us
that whisper ugly words into our ears.
My soul is at war, it is a fight
between the human and the monster in me,
and I fear... that the monster will win.

The monster controls me...
it forces me to think the worst of others
and it tells me to isolate myself,
to protect myself from those evil humans.
The monster dictates my every move,
I must pretend that I am a human...
lest anyone think of me as a monster.

The human inside of me has long died
and the seemingly innocent person you see  
is nothing but a disgusting monster
hiding in the body of another,
preying on the weaknesses -
the weaknesses of those frail humans
and feasting on their flaws.

I wanted to be human,
but I'm a monster.

And I hate myself for it.
I'm the one whispering those ugly words into your ear.
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:iconmaryitis:
MaryItIs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job!
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JeanneyLost Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student General Artist
I listen to "monster" by skillet very often these days and this poem remembers me of it. Very well done!
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SvalaW Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can so realate to that sometimes.
I really like the flow of this poem, especially the first stanza, and the pause in and I fear... that the monster will win. That's just really well done in my opinion.
Great work.
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first second is my favourite =)
This is very well written.
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DeviantArtist14 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student General Artist
amazing poem, sad and deep :clap: nice work :)
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tattoo-love-forever Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I like it so much...:)
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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great..
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
thank you!
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KuraiOkamiTenshi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
This reminds me of the song Monster by Skillet...it's cool.
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Haven't heard of that song. .___. thank you!
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pollyholly Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Shut the f... up already than, just kidding I love the poem :)
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:icontherealanonymous:
therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
hahahaha :happybounce:
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pollyholly Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
:smoking: :)
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BlackLuna2505 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh my god...i think your right of that...everyone had a monster deeply inside... that great poem, i really like it :D
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
thank you! :hug:
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chancerox Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
those who admit to their flaws fight harder than the others. this is beautiful, keep writing. :)
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
thank you ❤ :huggle:
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jmart13 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alone...I have felt that as a child...for 6 years I felt it consume even the shadows that took refuge in me...choking me, eating away at me it did...abuse, torment...I have felt it all as a child, yet I changed and survived to the next day to endure more pain and adapt to my loneliness and eventually I took solace in the that very loneliness, seeing how everyone couldn't stand 10 seconds without talking to their friends, I however embraced it, feeling the twisted embrace corrupt me slowly as I secluded myself from the horrors of a tormented and battered childhood...but in that solace I felt it...doubts, good doubts eat at me telling me that life I led was slowly killing me...slowly so I asked myself and looked at myself in a mirror and saw what I was...a twisted and lonely person, without hope, love and compassion. I felt the time to change and taking that last inch of strength I thought about it and I changed my ways and eventually I blossomed and grew out of my shell into a beautiful...person capable of achieving anything.
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
:hug:
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:iconjmart13:
jmart13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aw thank you :D
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KurosPassions Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
we all have our demons we must face we all fear and fell weak but its a battle you must win or your soul will break and your life will be traped in a pit of endlesss sorrow
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
How do I know I'm not already trapped in a pit of endless sorrow?
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KurosPassions Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i don't but i kno it will or has
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