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We all have little monsters in us
that whisper ugly words into our ears.
My soul is at war, it is a fight
between the human and the monster in me,
and I fear... that the monster will win.

The monster controls me...
it forces me to think the worst of others
and it tells me to isolate myself,
to protect myself from those evil humans.
The monster dictates my every move,
I must pretend that I am a human...
lest anyone think of me as a monster.

The human inside of me has long died
and the seemingly innocent person you see  
is nothing but a disgusting monster
hiding in the body of another,
preying on the weaknesses -
the weaknesses of those frail humans
and feasting on their flaws.

I wanted to be human,
but I'm a monster.

And I hate myself for it.
I'm the one whispering those ugly words into your ear.
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MaryItIs Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome job!
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JeanneyLost Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student General Artist
I listen to "monster" by skillet very often these days and this poem remembers me of it. Very well done!
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SvalaW Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can so realate to that sometimes.
I really like the flow of this poem, especially the first stanza, and the pause in and I fear... that the monster will win. That's just really well done in my opinion.
Great work.
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The first second is my favourite =)
This is very well written.
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DeviantArtist14 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing poem, sad and deep :clap: nice work :)
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tattoo-love-forever Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I like it so much...:)
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BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great..
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
thank you!
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KuraiOkamiTenshi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
This reminds me of the song Monster by Skillet...it's cool.
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Haven't heard of that song. .___. thank you!
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