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Congratulations.

Why, congratulations...you win!
And this will be the ninth time,
the ninth time you've won.
Soon enough, it'll be the tenth
and it's what I hate most about you -
how you want to win, all the time.

A mere joke can be twisted into
an inevitable argument, where
hot tears are shed and
relationships are broken.
That's why you're always,
always, going to be alone...
because you can't bear to lose,
'cause you're only used to winning.

Congratulations... you win,
and your prize?
A lifetime of loneliness.
:icontherealanonymous:
Here's a technically-not-so-good poem that I wrote. But hot tears were shed.
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*AussieDidge Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
In one of his songs, Scatman John sung this verse, which succinctly defines this poem...

"Everybody's born to compete as he chooses, but how can someone win when winning means that someone loses...?"

Winning only counts when it's during the most important stages of your life; say your marriage, having a wonderful family, a satisfying job, maybe the perfect retirement when all is said and done. At least that's my belief.

A well-expressed poem that truly asks everyone to search within themselves, to determine whether winning everything, from petty arguments to future careers and whatnot, is actually worth all the trouble. Would you be willing to ostracise yourself from everybody else because you're so obsessed with being the best, where opinions differ from person to person? :iconthinkingplz:
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''Winning only counts when it's during the most important stages of your life; say your marriage, having a wonderful family, a satisfying job, maybe the perfect retirement when all is said and done. At least that's my belief.''

Completely agree. Thank you for your comment! :hug:
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*AussieDidge Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just thinking about it again for a moment, wouldn't it be different for sportsmen and sportswomen? :iconthinkplz:

After all, they don't get paid millions of dollars in sponsorships and career "winnings" if they lost all the time... Hell, they'd probably be forced to bow out from public disgrace if that ever happened. =p

Aside from that, it's my pleasure, thanks for giving me something to think about. =)
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Wow...this...

I was friends with this girl who's just like this. She wanted to win all the time and she constantly hurt me because of it to the point where her selfishness literally put my life in danger. I eventually got fed up with it and ended our "relationship", but it was too late. She hasn't learned at all, and she wants to continue being friends with me. I just hope that she realizes that when she moves on to bigger things no one is going to put up with her crap (pardon my slightly vulgar vernacular) and so she'll be by herself.

Anyway, thank you for writing this. :heart:
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It's my pleasure, and I'm sorry you had to encounter such a person. :hug:
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`lintu47 Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello :wave:
You have been featured in my weekly dA love for everyone! article.
Have a nice day :dalove:
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`lintu47 Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :happybounce:
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