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My mind tends to wander…
Of a home so very sweet.
A loving mum and dad that
Made everything all neat.
Our home was a shack that
Could crumble with a touch.
Even though it was nothing,
We never wished for much.
Our ugly and dirty home
Radiated a love so sweet.
Sculptured with pieces of trash,
It made me feel complete.
It doesn't feel the same now -
Mum and dad have left me.
I miss our home sweet home
And all the lovely memories.
Of a home so very sweet.
A loving mum and dad that
Made everything all neat.
Our home was a shack that
Could crumble with a touch.
Even though it was nothing,
We never wished for much.
Our ugly and dirty home
Radiated a love so sweet.
Sculptured with pieces of trash,
It made me feel complete.
It doesn't feel the same now -
Mum and dad have left me.
I miss our home sweet home
And all the lovely memories.
Literature
I've Changed (Yeah right)
I've Changed (Yeah right):
You know, I tell myself everday,
That I'm going to change - that I'll be different.
'This isn't the same; I'm not the same,' that's what I tell myself...
As I sit in front of the computer, praying time doesn't move.
Coward, you're weak and you'll always be weak! You bloody disgrace...
I pick up some new magazine, get inspired,
'I want to be like that guy,' is what I think to myself.
I give it a try for two or three days - I quit.
Same old shit again...
Making up excuses? It's what you always do, you gutless wonder...
I try to reach out with my hands,
Seeking something, anything that I can find to help myself ho
Literature
R.I.P.
Did anyone notice that she winced if you raised your arm?
Did anyone notice that her eyes were wide with alarm?
Did anyone notice that she never looked you in the eye?
Did anyone notice that her voice was but a sigh?
Did anyone notice that her skin was always bruised?
Did anyone question whether she might be abused?
Did anyone question why she walked in obvious fear?
Did anyone question why one day she did not appear?
Did anyone recognize her face on the six-o’clock news?
Did anyone see her remains pulled from the river refuse?
Did anyone care that this quiet girl no longer exists?
No. No one did. And she will never even be missed.
R.I
Literature
You're Not?
You're anorexic if you're thin
You're not? Then you're obese.
If you're different, you're insane
You're not? Then you're a fake.
If you're happy, you're hiding something.
You're not? You must be emo.
If you're dating, you're a slut.
You're not? You must have no friends.
If you're popular, you're a jerk.
You're not? You're a nobody.
If you're quiet, you must be disabled.
You're not? You obnoxious freak.
If you're you, you're wrong.
You're not?
Then you must be perfect.
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This is an entry for a contest themed ''Home Sweet Home'' by a group called #writeaway
Here is a link to the journal post regarding the contest:
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I really wanted to mix up the theme, so although the theme was one of a positive, where you associate the phrase ''Home Sweet Home'' with thoughts like, ''Oh my gosh, my childhood was amazing.'' But I especially wanted to alter it into a sort of atmosphere that made the reader feel sympathetic towards the protagonist. Just to clarify some things, the last stanza for the rhyming scheme, ABCB, the rhyme is intentionally not complete as it reminds the reader how everything comes to an end and how the protagonist in the poem can no longer wish for what was once their Home Sweet Home - fitting into the context that the rhyme must break somewhat towards the end of the poem.
The poem is written in a simplistic form as I wanted it to serve from the perspective of an innocent child that misses what they had before they grew up and their world changed.
It also reflects the simplicity of the home and and reminds the reader that things in life don't have to be complicated in order to achieve happiness.
Phew, that was quite a description. I just had to clarify what I wanted to convey through this poem, thank you if you actually bothered to read it!
Here is a link to the journal post regarding the contest:
[link]
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I really wanted to mix up the theme, so although the theme was one of a positive, where you associate the phrase ''Home Sweet Home'' with thoughts like, ''Oh my gosh, my childhood was amazing.'' But I especially wanted to alter it into a sort of atmosphere that made the reader feel sympathetic towards the protagonist. Just to clarify some things, the last stanza for the rhyming scheme, ABCB, the rhyme is intentionally not complete as it reminds the reader how everything comes to an end and how the protagonist in the poem can no longer wish for what was once their Home Sweet Home - fitting into the context that the rhyme must break somewhat towards the end of the poem.
The poem is written in a simplistic form as I wanted it to serve from the perspective of an innocent child that misses what they had before they grew up and their world changed.
It also reflects the simplicity of the home and and reminds the reader that things in life don't have to be complicated in order to achieve happiness.
Phew, that was quite a description. I just had to clarify what I wanted to convey through this poem, thank you if you actually bothered to read it!
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